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tangled up in blue eyes

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Her hair was the kind of brown where you just knew she was born blonde. Eyes, big and bright, filled with a wonder I couldn't name or place. She kept a ribbon tied in her hair; never yellow, it reminded her of mothers and children. She was a mystery to everyone and a misery to me.

They said that the colour of her skin was something that resembled perfection. White porcelain with peach undertones, something of a doll; a child made from china, painted colourful with deft fingers scarred blue.

Curiousity got the best of me and I looked too deep, too quickly; oceanic blue eyes that shifted like they'd already drowned every living soul that had stepped too close, sand-lined belly full, sated. I started to wish I'd learnt to swim but the waves were almost poetic, I kept yelling and each of my syllables would form a bubble that would float the surface and be lost. That was easy enough to explain with the laws of physics and the taste of salt water in my throat.

When i yelled at her in the house, the words just vanished, lost momentum and dropped in the slightly too large gap between us; word-bricks made up of the coppery tang of blood and stale hate.

She began to fade a little over time, her flesh turned opalescent and her breath dulled to the softest of whispers; an unfurling of child-waves new to the sea. Colours dimmed for her then and I became emboldened; I taunted her paper flesh with vicious kisses given by lips made of memory and the slightest tang of ivory until I was my own mystery and her misery.
a collab with the wonderful
~Lacewinged-Beauty
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PassionsInsanity's avatar
Mmmh, this is very interesting. I didn't realise at first that this was a collab, so I kept trying to figure it out. When I realised it was a collab, it suddenly made more sense for some reason. Perhaps because when doing a collab myself, I always feel like you're trying to weave to separate types of rope together and though it will most likely be beautiful, it's still two minds strangled up together.
I do, however, really love the tone of this piece. It's nice and soft, like an autumn pastel colour.. It's like there's something on your fingers and you carefully rub them against each other and you feel that there is something there, but you can't quite grab it. And I adore the abstract with the colours and the concepts that are pulled from those.
Btw, this line "Her hair was the kind of brown where you just knew she was born blonde"? Friggin' gorgeous!

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