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don't shoot the messenger
she told herself

but her aim was unsteady
and the wind blew her off target

they were all rotten anyway.
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belfastrush Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
You always convey so much in such a small spattering of words. It strikes me, that approaching mastery of the meeting of economical & beautiful that you have.

For all that the tone is matter-of-fact, addressing the collateral damage, the people involved, as unimportant, there's a lingering sense of regret lurking underneath the jaded exterior. It pairs very well with the image of the archer, and the arrow, and how hopefully the speaker attempts to blame outside factors.
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