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you were gone before it even sank in that you were really there.
habit is the worst thing, cause it made me so blind to the fact that you could
just as easily be snatched away from me.

i should have hugged you at least four more times

i've spent the better half of a year being your definition of evil and insane
at the same time. i've known better than everything i've done, but done it
anyway. god knows i've repeated the same tedious/dangerous/stupid
actions over and over wanting/expecting different results.

you wouldn't be proud of me for anything anymore.

but i'm still mad at you, i'm sure of it. if you waded through the
rising tides, or peeled away my blue like old house paint, you'd find something
that screams how you broke everything inside me. and how you were one single event
that taught me that just cause something ends, that doesn't mean its over.

and that i will waste every single change given to me.

the only thing you ever told me that i listened to, was to rest occasionally. just breath and
sit and let the quiet put things back in their rightful place. things are far too tangled
and disorganised for some simple quiet to restore anything now though.
and i just sit and wait for either a miracle
or a bigger wave.
its 1am here right now.
and i should be in his arms sleeping.
but lucky me is right back to aching over you.

when the fuck did you sneak back in?
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hazeltown Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is one of my favorites.
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30SixDegrees Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I hate that I can relate to this so well. But it is beautifully written.
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ohsparrowsong Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
:heart:
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apocalyptic-thereom Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful writing technique and unimaginably amazing imagery, this was beautiful.
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ohsparrowsong Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013
thank you <3
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violetense Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Writer
sit and wait for either a miracle or a bigger wave.
Great image.
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:iconohsparrowsong:
ohsparrowsong Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
thank you <3
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Lacewinged-Beauty Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013   Writer

Interesting.
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ohsparrowsong Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
good or bad interesting?
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Lacewinged-Beauty Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013   Writer

An I'm not sure yet kind of interesting.
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